Brian

 //Space Wars//  //Aec and Seth are in space wars in 2449,and they are close to victery.“Ace hurry up with those space Tanks we're going to get blown to bit's.We won't even see space in 2450”said Ken,our pilot of THE HOLY DEVIL.// ” //I'm tring,ok,just Shut up and let me do my job...by leting me THINK.” “Do you really want to back talk to me?.” “No sir mummbled Ace.” “Now hold on right there,and look out the window.” said Seth.Seth was one of my best friends at the acatamey.Seth has a mas of hair the color of a Dandylion.So as I was saying the space tanks were all reatreting,so that told us what they were going to do...The Ultimat space finisher. That was their motherships super-power.The enemy was,The Zarock and The Mazerock.Our motherships,United Space Un super-power “The Yellow Flood”it's a flash flood of a yellow laser beam.Their's is a giant red beam that 50 miles wide.so we had to get out of there.FFFFFFFFFFFFFZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTSSSSSSSS SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS.“Just made it”said Ken.Most of the fleet didn't make it out,so the last of the fleet could make at small mothership. “SHKKKK Red eagle can you hear me,this is Blue Quake.” “Yes Blue Quake.What is it?” “Land Rover picked up a land signal.And we're going to dock.” “But what if the enemy is there.We'll be squashed.And did they ckeck for life on the planet?” “Their ckecking now....They just replide,there is life but it seems harmless.” “Well,I want a droid to go down and see if it is harmless.” “Under stood.Over and Out.”As soon as we hung up we saw a prone go tored the planet. “NO NO NO NO NO NO NO,I SAID A DROID NOT A PRONE!!!!!!!As soon as the prone hit the planet we turned on the prones vidio cam.Soon it found the creature,it started to go toreds it,then,all of a sudden,we lost the creature.Then it hit,the prne turned to leave but the creature was there,then it got bigger and bigger.then it got worse,it's teeth were getting longer,also it's claws.then it just steped on our prone. “SHKKKK so what,we have to get out and strech our legs.We'll just be 3 min ok.”So we headed for the planet.when every one was about to get in their ships,unbalevably the creature was there and to add on,it crushed all the ships!! “AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH” “NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO AAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGG” screames of some men that stayed in their ship yelled as they were crushed.“ I told you it was a bad Idea.But at leaset we got everything out.” “Now we had to get going,there might be preditors.” Seth Ken and I staye to see if anything we missed, “Seth hurry up we're going to lose the others”I said tring to keep the group.Our//  //group was not even a group,we only have 6 people.If we lost them,our hope would be diminished,but good thing all of them were our best fighters.soonas we got to the group we saw that we found a sowtible compsite,another good thing,we had made a small fort!!And we just finished when the prediters came to see if they could have a feast.Luckly we were ready,for our lookout men shot some of them.So we had a dinner for at least today.The next//  //day we set out to find some edible food .Last night's dinner was quit rubury.So we had to find something that would be tasty and easy to eat.Ken,Bill,John,and Henry went out on an scouting party.Several hours later and they still didn't return,and at the beging of night we finaly heared what we didn't want to hear. “PHING AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH PHING”then we saw the preditors draging large items,but to bad for us that we know what they were.//  //Our camp was getting smaller and smaller each day because of the prediters,and soon it would be only me and Seth and when that day came we begged them not to.They left all the hevy guns and started off to see where the preditors took the others.First they went to the ship sight to get a strong but movalbe base.Once they were don with the base the set out,as soon as they got 82.9feet away from the old base they saw the preditors caming at full speed,they only had inof time to drop the base and run inside it and close the enterence.Then we ran up to the line wall and started to shoot the predidtors down.As soon as they shot about 30 they started to run away.So that started the night,who knows,maybe they will come tomarow with an animal that can hold a gun. “RAGGHHHLLLL” “Ace get over here and hurry!!!”The next day had started and Seth was the one to show me the deserted planet.When I went out I saw a strange creature standing near Seth, “WATCH OUT!!!IT'S GOING TO KILL YOU!!!” “No it't's not,it's actualy harmless.” “What?” “ya almost scared it away.It's harmless.” “Oh,sorry.”So it turned out it was harmless,and it turned out to be really nice.If it could help us take the base to where the preditors were. “Can you understand it?And if you can can you ask if it will help us go to the preditors cave?” “I can understand it because it uses telapathy.I asked your question alredy.It says non of the animals know where the strange things live.” “I think we were wrong about the enemy is here.I think they sent their prisin gards.” “I was thinking the same thing”//  //So Seth,the aninimal,and I set out on the journy to find the cave.After about an hour we started to see a moutain loom up.When we started up the second half moutain we saw some rocks come down the mountain,we looked up and we saw what we didn't want to see.The preditors were ambushing. “Hurry,get to the wall!!!”So we raced in and before we could get the door,some of the prison gards jumped in. “PHEEHP” “wham”I looked up in surprise,the animal whacked half of what we took out in 3 min.!! “Whoa” we both said.After a couple of whacks all but one were gone.We kept the prison guard a prisoner of our own.The prison guards did not dare to come close to us for the rest of the day.For months on end we searched for the cave.After a long 3 years of searching.At the 3 month of the 3 year we found a strange cave that was near where we had started .As we came near it we came near the opening,we heard creeping voises coming from a comunicater. “Their calling bfor help!We can't let them!”So we loaded some guns and then we charged in started to blast what we thought were the prison guards.But soon we noticet the things we were fighting were the mutated prisoners!! “NNNNOOOO”we both yelled.We went over to one of the mutans that looked like Ken.We nelt by “him”.We didn't see the others rise and heal!But 30seconds later we heard growls again.We looked around and saw the mutants rising again.we did what was easyest,we shot Ken.Then we looked up and saw the mutants serounding us.We shot them as many times we could,but we coulden't see a sliver of hope.As soon as we ran out of bullets we got some luck.The creature came with a small group of other creatures.Then the creatures started wumpping and trumping and stumping,they nearly killed everthing!When the battle was over we went to see howthhe creature was.But befor I left the cave I saw aa small crack in the wall,and there was a strange glow. “Can anyone dig here?” I asked.Soon we had asmallinof gap to slip through.There was a glowing rock that gave a strange aroura.Seth was thinking when I had an idea. “Give me one of the plasma gernades,please.”So Seth gave me one and I said I was going to pull the triger and the others saaw the rest.So I counted down. “3,2,1!And I droped the gernade and we ran like we were chickens with our heads cut off.Then “BAMMMM”.There was a Dead silence.I looked around the crack and the stone was no more.We loo0ked at the mutants and then at each other.We had nothing to do now but die.So we made it easy for us both,we shot our selves.//

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