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 SMASH! By Abby Cobb On a hot summer day, the ground was like a frying pan I thought my feet would turn to scrambled eggs then fall off, luckily I ran into the the icecube pool. I saw the big slide roaring water as people went down it and the snake like line to the diving board. “who wants to go on the big slide with me?”I asked.  “I does!” yelled Ryan  “ok ry-ry!” we went down the big slide yelling wee all the way down. Then we both got out got of the pool and ran to the baby pool, BEEEEP yelled the lifeguards wistle, UGG! I thought.  The kids went down the baby slide, and of course I had to help. Vip,vip said the slide as they went down it.  When Ryan stood up on the top of the slide he stepped over and tripped...... SMASH he screamed with pain.  My mom just said “ are you ok baby?” and I thought he was ok too and it would be ok, but we were wrong, we discovered a big bump and a big scrape. I remember when I was 3 and my friend Renae was talking about a concussion he had when he was little. I wondered if Ryan had a concussion.  Oh no I thought as a million things went through my head like:is he going to be ok? What's going to happen? Will he go to the hospital? When will he get out of the hospital if he does?  Then my dad took him and sprinted to the car.  I was crying hisaricly and didn't what to do, but I took Noelle and Mason to our spot to get their suff, the people next to us asked “ are you all right?” yes I shook my head because I was to scared to talk. Noelle and Mason didn't really know what was going on, but I couldn't get ryan out of my head because I loved him and he was hurt.  Noelle,Mason,my mom and I went home. My dad called us so he could tell us he had a concussion but was doing well. He was starting to do well by talking, moving, and laughing. I hope this NEVER happens again. I said, happily that night at dinner.  THE END  Authors note: if this happens to you like it did to me, don't be freaked it will be ok, ok? Also Ryan is doing sooooo well and he came to my house a couple weeks ago... I gave him a teddy bear! :^)