Essay3

Eleven is a very good story. Through out the story I think she is trying to say that sometimes you feel different ages and sometimes don't feel the age you are.I think it is a very good story.once I had a birthday and I thought the second I woke up I would feel different.Then my dad got mad at me for something and I cryed like I was three in front of my friends.

Once Rachel felt three in the story and she cryed like she was three. An example is once on my sisters birthday her friends were being mean to her. She started to cry and I think that she might have felt three and or some other age. An other suporting example is once Erin felt three because she didn't want to go to the shower. And so she went on their couch and fell and got a mild concushon. An other reason is once in church I saw a person crying. She (or he) she might of (or did) felt three.