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The Ride

“Ride number two.Off the ground ride.”My friend Trever said.Then when I was blankly staring at the rollercoster thing that was a spinning,red color,rope connected to a chair (thats how you spin) I was thiking “it can't posablly be that scary”. Then we saw how short the line was so we walked under a bar to the next to the next an so on. After we caght up with the line we had an argument about who hold the backpack. “I want to hold it” said all of us at once. “I'll hold it” said my friend Trever.“I get to hold it because I'm older.” “Fine” said me and Shawn. But then I remembered that Iwas wereing sandels.Now what will I do if that can just fly off on the ride? Trever said “just put them on the side or something”. Ok that is covered.Then I remembred I ate a huge rainbow colered,swirly,circle shape loipop soI had conversation about barfing on the ride and flying in your own face or landing in someone elses face even on someones head that is waiting in line. While straping the seatbelt on I saw a grandpa on the ride wich was awkward because you just don't see a random gradma/grandpa go on a Elichis ride.Whos grandpa was that any way?I wonder if he is going to be for him when it starts. Then I notice this girl that was all wet(how did she get wet?) and she said “I've been on this ride three times.” “Ok.”I said. Just as the person that worked there anounced the saftey rules(wich souded like she was saying bla bla bla bla bla) I was bored out of my mind,and yet I was wondering what she was saying right before the ride started.It started to spin.I heard th girl say “this is going to be so fun.”It started goin faster and faster and we went up and up. Ahhhh!The girl screamed. Owww!My ears.Only if I that that would happen two months later how loud that it was I would of covered my ears as tight as I could. Then while I turned my head around the wind was blowing on my face,and I noticed the grandpa was sitting completly still like nothing was going on and I thought “akward. While it got faster I was thinking “I'm going to snap of the rope,but hopefullyI'll land in the nice pudlle pond thing over there.Or I could fall on the wood(above the line)or mybe on that brige near the pudlle pond thing”. Then while we were rapidlly spining I felt rain drops. “It's raining?”I said in a questionable voice. “How is it raining now?I didn't feel it earlyer? “Ooooohhhhh” I said while spinning rapidlly.“That's how the girl got wet.It was raining.But how is it going so fast?It just started”. “All well.” I said “I might as well enjoy the ride.Woohoooo!”I shouted. Then I noticed that we got lower and it got slower so I looked around,un fasened my seatbelt and got of the seat. “Wow.I can't beileve that girl is going again” I said leaving and seeing the grandpa leaveimg looking unbalinced. “I'm glad I didn't get sick from that lolipop” I said as I got of the ride” As I was walking out of the ride I remembered that I took of my sandles before I got on the ride so as I passed the place were everyone put theire stuff I grabed my sandeles. “I can't believe” it I said while I was walking away from the ride.“It acttulywas a little bit frighting even after I got enjoying it.”

by:Tony